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The Second Goalkeeper

After the last training session of the season, Kit tells his coach he is not coming back in August, and that the reason is standing on a different touchline.

الكاستينج
boy, 15 to 18
المدة
حوالي 116 ثانية
المستوى
intermediate
المكان والزمان
An empty changing room after the final training session of the season, one strip light flickering, the coach's keys already in his hand.
عنوان المشهد
INT. CHANGING ROOM - EVENING
تنبيهات المحتوى
A pushy parent, described not shown وSuitable for school auditions
اللغة
العربية
ملاحظات الدور

الفئة العمرية للأداء: 15 to 18

Kit

الأهداف: Leave the club on good terms and keep the real reason from sounding like a complaint about his father.

العقبات: The coach assumes it is about the bench, and correcting him means describing what happened at home.

مقترحات الاختيار

  • Kit has rehearsed the first paragraph and not the rest. Where does he run out of script?
  • The 'proper gloves' sentence is the hinge. Decide what Kit sees when he says it.
  • He ends on a piece of goalkeeping advice. Is it a gift, a deflection, or both?
النص الكامل

The Second Goalkeeper

INT. CHANGING ROOM - EVENING

Kit is the last one in, still in his kit, boots in one hand. He stands between the coach and the door.

Kit

I'll be quick, you've got the pitch to lock up. I'm not coming back in August. I wanted to say it to your face and not on the group thing, because you've been decent to me and I'm not going to do it with a thumbs up.

It's not the bench. I know that's what you think. Two seasons, four starts, all of them when Ollie had his wisdom teeth out. I've made my peace with being the one who warms him up. I got good at it. I can tell what mood he's in from how he catches.

It's Sam. My brother. He's eleven. He got picked for the under-twelves on Tuesday, and I was there when the letter came, and I watched Dad read it. He did the thing. The little nod. And then, 'Right. We'll get you some proper gloves.' That's the sentence. That's how it started with me. Proper gloves, then the drills in the garden, then the match on the telly on Sunday with the pause button, then the drive home when I'd let one in. Forty minutes. No radio.

Sam doesn't know any of that yet. He just thinks he's got a kit. Their matches are Saturdays at ten, same as ours, other side of the park. So I can't be in two places, and I'm choosing the touchline. I'm going to stand on the opposite side from Dad and clap when Sam picks the ball out of the net, so that there's one voice doing that. He should have one.

That's it. You don't have to say anything. Keep the gloves, they're the club's anyway. Ollie's going to need someone new who can read him. Tell them to watch his left hand.

ترخيص البروفة

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الاستخدامات المسموح بها

  • بروفات التمثيل والحوار الشخصية، بما في ذلك مشاركة نسخة عمل مع شريك مشهد واحد
  • دروس التمثيل وورش دراسة المشهد التي يقودها مدرّب
  • تمارين selftape غير التجارية وتدريبات ملف الأعمال الخاصة

القيود

  • يُحظر إعادة البيع أو إعادة الترخيص أو النشر أو التوزيع خارج استخدامات البروفة المسموح بها أعلاه
  • يُحظر الإنتاج التجاري أو البث أو الأداء المدفوع أو الاقتباس المربح من دون إذن كتابي مستقل
  • يُحظر حذف إشعار حقوق النشر أو نص الترخيص من نسخ العمل المنزلة أو المشتركة
  • يُحظر الادعاء بأن المادة رسمية أو مرتبطة بأي علامة ترفيهية مذكورة أو معتمدة منها